PkrBum wrote:Both excited to explore they changed clothes and made their way downstairs. Entering the lower level the atmosphere becomes dank and foreboding. The room with the pool is more open with glistening rough stone walls.
Meh... this is sounding too textbook scary movie. I'm going to think about a more unique lead in. Something more anti-rhythm... maybe like blair witch meets tarantino.
PkrBum wrote:I'm still mulling it. I'm now thinking it might be best as an experience into mental illness... a chaos vs comfort. Something the viewer would only get glimpses of during the bulk of story... maybe a few disjointed things that tip you that things aren't what they appear. It's disturbing to imagine a person that can't understand that they don't operate in reality.
Anyway... not giving up... just trying to picture a complete scenario that hasn't been done over and over.
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